Apr 29, 2009

i can...

can i write??
just a lame try
to see if i can..
can i fight??
with the world outside
n the world within..
the turmoil am goin' through
nobody else can sight
nor do i want anyone to pity my plight!
who should decide what is right
for me or for others
n it would only be my might
to undo my scene that has become too tight...
am told there would be light
at the end of this long tunnel
guess it should fill me with delight
push me further to soar like a kite
n scale new heights!
oh, that's exactly what am hoping to do at this very moment tonight! :)



Jason said...

ramble on kid!

cosmic said...

I am not a very good critic but what i've learnt out of my previous experiances was that i should be true to what i feel. i didnt feel much, and that may be a reflection of what i expect to see and that has got nothing to do what you feel, which is important here. I hope you keep this on as honestly as possible.

Deepali said...

supaaaaaa! :)

Laxmi Salgaonkar said...

nice...you should write more often..

quaintkal said...

thanku laxmibai for those kind words :)

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